Skittles

Alright! This is actually really cool! I love the colors, I love your style. Personally I don't like critiquing art for this reason, but I will give it a shot. ...

Alright, the first thing I noticed was the elongated neck. It's quite like a giraffe's but that is okay. Some people have big necks I suppose.... Well anyway, the shading ...

The Runaway Lewis Parker sat on the curb. It was nearly noon and the sun was at its highest, glaring down at him with a fiery intensity. It had been ...

Locked From the Outside The old mansion is what I seek The mysteries of lives long and forgotten With secrets and hidden meaning that tempt me Forest trees reach for ...

Fairies Fairies flutter and flow above each cloud Their hearts are golden, they are proud They follow the trail of the saffron sun As it begins to slip beneath the ...

Just something i worked on at three in the morning....couldn't sleep :) THE LANTERN IS LIT The lantern is lit Brightening the path of the lost Hung by the sleepless ...

Please feel free to review! I've been trying to work on the beginning of this book, I think I found the best I could think of, since all other options ...

wow! this is yeah, just gunna like this piece... ~Skittles P.S. CONTINUE THIS STORY!!!! i wanna learn more!

Wow....i like where its headed because,well, i don't know exactly where it is headed. you leave me wanting to know more! so....give it to me or else. Some of it ...

The presence was strong. It was a young woman and she was troubled and afraid. He wanted to reach out and help her, but she was intangible, only an existence. ...

Alright...First...i would split everything up so that it isn't so long. I read the first chapter, the beginning was sorta cool. I always give a book a few lines after ...

thanx!

*Likes* This was a breath of fresh air. I read it right before i went to sleep and am happy to tell you, it gave me wonderful dreams.... I have ...

Please feel free to review...if you want. I worked on these two for concepts only, just so I could have an idea of who i was writing about when it ...

Clara walked to Madame Alaxia’s with Luan by her side. Clara didn’t trust the witch with one fiber of her being, and Luan wouldn’t let his little sister walk alone ...