SkillzBeat

Thank you! And I agree, this writing isn't the best I could've done.

Thanks for the review! I am still working on punctuation placing, so thanks for helping me out.

Thank you for the review. I think yours made it a little bit clearer to me. I was aware this is not one of my best works, but I guess ...

I'll take into consideration all that you say, but it makes perfect sense to me. When I play it, it sounds fine. I don't really have any of those transition ...

I really liked the way you described the duality of your name. Keep up the good work! Peace

Please enjoy my work! :D When my throat is so dry, I can't laugh, I just cough And I'm still singing, only with the radio off Don't act like you're ...

Thank you so much! And, yes. Poor Rosaleen is a prostitute. I'll post some more work when I get the chance.

Thanks for the review! Oh, and the choice was the demons. Which demon was she more afraid of. And, no, she's not a movie star or anything, but she probably ...

I wrote this one quite a while ago. I hope you enjoy it, and tell me what I can improve on. Especially if there's something staring you right in the ...