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I think its awesome that you made him evil - he's just too goody goody in the book. And arn't all the stereotypical vampyres supposed to be evil? It was ...

aww that was sad. Is it based around world war two or somethind? its just when it says 'The soldier listens to a shout in a strange language ' it ...

This is really good - lol i envy you your talent x I agree with what your saying I feel the same all the time especially when I'm at school. ...