SirenCymbaline

Daaaaayum this must have been complicated to program the arrangement of the spacing for this, props to that dedication. The placement of the lines down the sides, with the bold ...

Heyo! Good choice to start with a Tonauac perspective. I like switching between the two of them- for the context and insight it brings into both the different people, and ...

First off, I really like Tonauac. He seems like a really nice guy. He's got a sense of humour, he's friendly, he laughs off death threats from stuck up Spanish ...

This prologue does a good job at setting up. The relationship between Mikey and William, William being an archaeologist, and the Mayan temple that's prolly gonna have something really interesting ...

Hey! Sorry I took a while. You've been doing fantastic at pumping these chapters out. I usually understand what lines are from Harry, and what lines are from Will, due ...

Remember when I said it'd be nice to know what the Tanis and Nerot colours were about two chapters ago? Nevermind. I actually really like learning this stuff gradually. It's ...

So I said in my last review that I liked that the torture scene was skipped over. But now that you've put it here, I like it a lot. The ...

First off, I'm conflicted about the dialogue in the opening scene. I really like the majority of it, but there's a few bits that feel awkward. ''I don’t know how ...

First off, loving the consistent sense of tension. I legit believe that the world Harry is living in and the dude she's going up against are to be taken seriously ...

And, full disclosure, I liked this one too. Welp. That sombre tone that carried through the whole thing was consistently strong. I felt on the same page as Harry the ...

First off, sorry I took way too long to get onto reviewing these. That's on me. Secondly, damn. I like this chapter so much I might just have a hard ...

Ayy, sorry I took way to long to get to this, especially after bugging you to post it. My bad. My style of reviewing nowadays mainly consists of me giving ...

That was nice and dramatic. I'll get two little nitpicks over with. The first one is you were spelling Hughes as Hugues for almost the whole chapter and it was ...

First off, catching me with a beautifully illustrated throat-stabbing is a pretty good hook to begin with. Describing all the details of it will always get me more than 'he ...

Again, well done with the sense of urgency. You're pretty good at causing and holding tension. There were just a few times where I was confused as to whose perspective ...