SirenCymbaline

Firstly, thanks for commenting, secondly, I'm not too down. It's about my first BFF (that I really miss) when I moved house. Sadly, she wasn't at school on my last ...

Love the title this is AWESOME!

Wow. This is the reason I follow you. (besides many other facts) you are amazing! Maybe some more meaningful words though...

Again the literary works of people on this site leave me speechless. That was captivating. Love it.

I read your story. A glass teardrop streams down my face and a smile forms. I am afraid to blink and lose the tear that emotion has gifted me. My ...

Definitely. I avoid music with words, though because I get mixed up with words I'm hearing and words I'm writing.

WOW! You are so lucky. How did you get published? I've always wanted to see my name in print. Congrats!

It's a good start! Needs work though.... How about a few deep, meaningful words?

I read your poem. My heart pounds. I feel....nothing. I honestly feel empty, even physically, and I feel icy in moderate temperature. It takes a true writer to do that. ...

...Speechless again... that is beautiful. I read this and suddenly feel so empty I could die, yet so full I could explode. I never knew that mere man could feel ...

Wow. That's touching. Maybe, in the poem, give a hint of how to not cry or something to do to make the child feel better.

How about.......Qiate? (say it Kea-tay) If that's not satisfactory, there's a site called seventh sanctum that I use when I have to name characters, places, or anything else!

The boundaries are endless. That is why fantasy was created, so that people may write whatever they want, without worrying about if what they're writing is true to the facts.

Depends on the book. If it's fantasy, probably not. If it's science fiction, possibly. Modern, maybe.

Speechless. That touches the soul. I cannot define the true value of your works. My only tip here is for me. To write like you.