SirenCymbaline

Nice poetry! Could you make it a tiny bit longer? Nice job anyway. Loved the story.

OMG XD LOL HEHE THAT ROCKS! :up: :grin: You are awesome I wish you were in the newspaper and not stupid Dilbert!

Wow great job! I like your work it's......................captivating. Keep writing!

Like a Bird, like the Wind, In a flight of Song, Like a Word, like a Warrior, Steadfast in beleif, Like a Straight in the Bend and a Legend that ...

Good. Needs a bit of work though. Maybe check out my poems for ideas. You might learn something. You need to use descriptive words and deep meaning. Get people to ...

I love this so much. When reflecting on my past, I sometimes come across this poem. It's sad. Your work is beautiful.

Speechless again. I love the way it's so sad yet so wonderful.

Awesome job. Love the way you portrayed the fact that no matter how much you long for the stars, you can never get close to them.

Amazing. Though sadness is not so bad if you enjoy it. (You wo'nt really understand what I just said unless you check my poem The Happiness of Sadness in 'other ...

Wow. Good job! If this is what you really feel or what really happened to you, I'm sorry. Maybe some deep meaningful words to paint it clearer?

Beautiful. Maybe more specific words and feelings?

Love it. I love the part that says 'mirrored in the sword'' or something similar. I have often imagined seeing my reflection in a blade. I love the passion, the ...

Wow. That came to you as a dream? I am trying not to cry. Maybe some more meaningful words?

Wow nice! LOVE IT. I love the rain.

Your birds chime the happy hour I'm a blue forgotten flower In a beau forest serene I'm walking in the pearl drop rain Your smiles' a rainbow once again From ...