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SirenCymbaline

And I've been putting out fire with gasoline

  • Official Polls Re: Do you write every day?

    In my notebook. I write down every thought that passes through my headt that's worth writing down. And whatever else.

    Sep 29, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Most Awesome Story Ever

    Before clicking on it, I thought 'Most Awesome Story Ever? that is a title that someone would use to make people read it. That is stupid, not even imaginative. WHY ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Patience chapter 2

    OK. Maybe I should have reviewed this long ago. I share her confusion. No-one has explained anything. She has just woken up and she seems to have been checked by ...

    Aug 5, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Golden

    Good stuff! Brought back some memory-images there. Very nice stuff. Not much of a review. I'll come finish when I can.

    Jul 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Fragile soul or Indifferent mind?

    Very good stuff. Very, very good stuff. Darkest piece I've ever seen. Not that I've seen everything. I like the title, it makes you wonder - is the bird just ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Other Re: The Black Sun-my nearly overdue entry for Villains comp

    I wrote this last minute and posted it hours before it was technically 4th July and end of comp. I didn't have time to put her into action, only time ...

    Jul 3, 2011
  • Storybook Basics Re: Creating Your Character

    Thanks for the guide, that really helps. This is the best generator site in the history of ever. There aer many different name generators to suit your theme/purpose. Also appearance ...

    Jul 1, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Balloons

    I love this. Didn't see any errors. Good story. We didn't get much information for the relationship between Josh and the girl but we didn't need any, the information we ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Princess And The Stones, chapter 3

    Nice job!I find Petah annoyingly amusing. His stupidity is crazy. How can someone so stupid be so handsome? Or.....maybe he's so stupid BECAUSE he's so handsome. Or at least to ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Mental Scars

    I love this. The 'lies' pic was real good. The mask one was my favourite. I like how one of her eyes is in the holes of the mask, the ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: I miss the Rain

    Dost thou knowst What you mean to me? O keeper of my sanity You showed me the beauty of sadness You acepted my ragged heart You were patient with my ...

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Pretty Little Lucifer

    I love this. I wonder- who is telling this to the boy? His conscience? His knowledge? common sense? And, the one telling him this- are they right? I love this. ...

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Dextra

    Pure brilliance. I usually pick literary artworks for the title and undertitle without really noticing who the author is until I click on it. I LOVE how you start your ...

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: Paper or Plastic?

    Hardcopy. I just can't adjust to a white screen full of words. I CAN NOT stare at a screen with a white background. (Thank goodness YWS has a BLUE background). ...

    Jun 5, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: Which is mightier?

    The sword is the pen, and the pen is the sword. How can I divide the two?

    May 31, 2011


You unlock this door with the key of imagination. Beyond it is another dimension: a dimension of sound, a dimension of sight, a dimension of mind. You’re moving into a land of both shadow and substance, of things and ideas. You’ve just crossed over into… the Twilight Zone.
— Rod Serling