SirenCymbaline

This is so brilliant, it is hard to review. Honestly. I DO NOT want you to change this. Any of this. The only part that needs editing is a few ...

I'm not very good at noticing words and grammar out of place, but I guess I may have a little for this story. It's a pretty, um, serious kind of ...

Oooooo I like it! Good job there. Though I know nothing of your character, I find her mysterious, pixie-ish, capable- I have my views. Very nice! The blueness in the ...

This is something odd I wrote. I know, most of it doesn't make sense, I don't fully understand all of it myself. And it is kinda.... cliche... And the structure ...

(Here I am. I'm not letting this SB die away. Noooooooooo way. Brilliant performance, Redfang. It was great to have interacted with your wonderful Luke. Hey, if anyone wants to ...

Annie B She stopped running when she came to the town again. She knelt to the ground. Now, she thought. Water plus dirt equals mud. Dirt was already there. The ...

I pasted 'Happiness of Sadness' (poetry) and I got CHARLES DICKENS! I read like less than half of one of his books, and I'm happy with the result. (I really ...

AnnieB Kazoo. Not the most fun place Annie'd ever been. The people were boring, the houses were boring. She was headed out of Kazoo, into wherever the road would take ...

AnnieB Kazoo. Not the most fun place Annie'd ever been. The people were boring, the houses were boring. She was headed out of Kazoo, into wherever the road would take ...

Hey guys. Thought this SB could use a little spice. Name- Annie B (no-one knows her actual surname) Age- Thirteen Appearance- A bit paler than most. She is a part ...

Lily Emin, Ballroom He spoke, his voice like rain, like ice, like the stars, like a river flow... ''I'm Luke, but most people know me by my surname, which is ...

Lily Emin, Ballroom. I awoke from my spell to find a young man behind me. He had such amazing eyes, more incredible than I could ever paint. ''Pardon me, but ...

Lily Emin, Ballroom I strode through the crowd, looking for someone I could approach. So many people here.....But there may as well be none if I can't talk to anyone. ...

Requesting claim on the last Partygoer space. Seventh Shadow, Partygoer Name- Lily Emin Age- 16 Gender- Female Appearance- Hope you like 'em 'cos I drew 'em myself. Lily.jpg Lily- Face.jpg ...

Wicked, is it OK with you if I take the Partygoer space?