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Re: A shot of Arrogance (Chapter Two)
Thanks for the reviews guys! They really are helpful. Don't worry about taking your time to review this, lily! I'm not one of those weird, strict people who cry if ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Skin [ Editied]
Hey again! Sorry, this won't be a proper review, I've just come back to comment on this story now that you've edited it again. Anything I would mention has already ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: The Three Billy Goats Gruff: The Troll's Story
Hey again Tam! :) You asked me to read over this again and see what I think. I've got to say, it's a lot better now! There are still the ...
May 13, 2010 -
Re: Nine Eleven revised
Hey sare, me again :twisted: I've just come back to this, simply to say how much I like it now! You took us reviewers advice and did your best to ...
May 7, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Six ~ Part Two)
Thanks a bunch for the reviews guys! Chapter 2 So I really like the first chapter. And I like most of this chapter. I like Anabel, and she barely talks. ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: My life as a human dreamcatcher Part 3
I'm glad I somewhat helped! As for the musician thing, it was more of a suggestion really. I just found it kind of weird how the Meg said he was ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: My life as a human dreamcatcher Part 1
Hey again :) I'm not stalking you, by the way. Well, not really... :roll: Anyways, Yaaay! You fixed the ending. It's a lot better now, well done! You've built up ...
May 3, 2010 -
Re: A shot of Arrogance (Chapter Two)
Thanks a bunch for the reviews guys! I really need to check over my work before I post it. Fair play to me though on this chapter, I did post ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Skins
Hey again Mystic 8) I'm happy that you've made this longer, it definitely works a lot better! You've cleared some things up as well. The Sid part, for example. Well ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Just 1411 left
Hey shubhi! It's me again :twisted: I'm just back to say how much better this is now. It was really good when I first read it and now it's even ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Five)
Thanks for the reviews guys, they are seriously helpful! I agree with everything you're all saying as well. I'm definitely going to revise and fix what needs fixing! I especially ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Survive Chapter Three
haha yeah! I'd just stick with the lower case god thing if I were you... I'm not good with religion... :lol:
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Four)
Thanks for the reviews guys! I really appreciate them. :) borntobeawriter ~ Thanks for reviewing what I have so far in one go :lol: As for the whole, Damien brother-uncle ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two ~ Part two)
I think you might have missed the first part of chapter two ninja :wink:
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: Survive Chapters 1-2
She ran up and dove at him, as he caught her in his arms. It sounded fine to start off with, to be honest. What I said was more of ...
Apr 18, 2010