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Aw good, I'm glad it wasn't just me rambling about nonsense!

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I'm glad I was of help! I do think you could give more details about the Original Being, and it won't spoile everything, so don't worry! Just be careful not ...

Aw thank you, it was my pleasure! I'm glad I was actually useful, and I wish you all the luck with this because it really is a great piece of ...

The italic coding messed up. D: CURSE YOU, CODING.

I didn't forget to check this thread for your response. Nope. Not at all. Buuuuuut, ahhh, she's twenty! I knew she'd either be young and super smart or older but ...

Thank you muchly, Twit! Ergh, ze fight scene. I know, I know. I've had trouble with that since day one, and trust me, it used to be far, far worse ...

Thanks for the review, Ahmad! I'm glad you liked it overall, even though you probably had no idea what was going on. xD As for your questions on the payphone ...

I feel all special now that I'm able to reply to a reply. :D Phew, I'm glad I was actually some help! The things I critiqued can be edited pretty ...

Yellooo! I think this is going to be more of a quick comment rather than a review because like I warned you, I'm rather suckish at reviewing edited things. :P ...

Oh! Oh! Oh! Yay! *Saves herself a review spot* I'll be back.

YES. *Saves myself a reviewing spot*

Thanks for all of the reviews, guys! I've had some serious trouble with this part, so I bow down to you all. @Shubhi, Punk, Azila, Flux, Anger, Eli, kaka, Tanya ...

*Apologises for being late* Sorry... x3 I've suddenly been attacked with hecticness. I'm away tomorrow and te day after, and will have no internet connection. Plus, I'm going to be ...

Feedback time! :P Thanks to everyone for being so patient with me on this part... It was like attack of the typos. This is what lack of spell checker does ...