Sins

Hey RK. Here for your review :wink: Forest Deep within the forest away from the village, a dark figure stirred. Oooo... I liked this opening sentence! :lol: A serpent slithered ...

Hey jas! Here to review :) I remember his strong arms that would wrap me in a hug when I needed it most. I remember his unusual green, hazel, blue ...

Hey shubhi! Here for a review 8) CHLOE RUSSO 26th June 12: 54 AM We were forging ahead with the case. We had found some footprints which could possibly lead ...

Heya yuriiko :) Here to review! “Have you ever heard about the upcoming high school dance this Saturday, Amanda? And has anyone already asked you out to be their date ...

Hey dragnet :) Don't worry about getting reviews straight away! This has only been up for almost two days :wink: I softly kissed him. His lips pressed back against mine ...

Hey RK! Here as requested :) Firstly, the nit-picks! The summer breeze washed over the village, covering the land in an unseen veil. I loved this as an opening sentence! ...

Hey Esther! Here to review, my hecklberry friend 8) Alex stood outside Anita’s guestroom, his fist poised in preparation to knock on her door. He had definitely not planned to ...

Hey there SameOld! :) Here to review. I'll start off with the nit-picks. I looked at Will carefully , as he continued rubbing his nose. You don't need a comma ...

Hey there :) This poem was really sweet! I especially like the layout of it. You ' r e sweet, you know, you really are. Your brown hair, blue eyes ...

Hey Ikafe :) Here to review. I haven't read the first four chapters of this, so you're going to have to bare with me! Red = Negative :( Blue = ...

Hey there shubhi! :D Here to review as requested. Red = Corrections Bold = My advise SEAN KERR 26th June 12:17 AM I was busy examining Amanda’s body while my ...

Hey again :) Here to review! “...mitri.” Came the soft whisper; a silver bell’s chime. “Dmitri.” He groaned and sighed heavily, pulling the blankets over his head, clinging to his ...

Hey there :) Her to review as requested. Chapter One - Sanctuary The breeze swept his unruly hair away from his face and back again, making the rough strands brush ...

Hey again! :D Here for your last review! Maybe I'll finally be able to find something to critique in this one! Considering you don't have any reviews yet, I might ...

Hey again! I completely agree with Jabber... Like your first two chapters, I really can't find anything to critique! It's slightly annoying... :lol: I feel like I'm not helping at ...