Sins

Heya! Here to review, obviously. :wink: “Home” is not something you’ve had to think a lot about. You’ve always told yourself, well, your parents love you, and you’ve got a ...

Hey jolene :) I'm not going to mention any nit-picks. Any nit-picks that I would have mentioned have already been mentioned by other reviewers. You especially got a good one ...

Heya Elinor! :) You've reviewed quite a lot of my stuff, so I thought I'd finally pay you back! all's well that ends well a revered line from Shakespeare it's ...

Heya yuriiko! Here to review as requested. 8) Red = Things I don't like :( Blue = Things I like :) Bold = My suggestions/comments Only hope I have to ...

Skins here (again) 8) Last review! I stalked to center stage first, random words spilling out of my mouth, stringing themselves together to form sentences that I yelled with as ...

Hey ninja! Me again :twisted: As had actually not been planned, David ran to the center of the hall and starting dancing with skill we didn't know he had. In ...

Hey ninja Les review... 8) "Well , then," Mr. Anderson said, You don't need the first comma here. He hurried back behind his desk, and the classroom broke into a ...

Hey ninja :) Here to review!!! I've got to be honest, I'm not really going to point out any nit-picks. Kaedee has given you a really, really good review and ...

Hey shubhi! Here to review, obviously :wink: I wiped off water from my face, looking at the wall constantly. This should be ~ I wiped the water from my face, ...

Hey ninja! Here to review as requested. :) His fingers twitched, as if trying to scoop up nonexistent hair product. I liked this line! He had grown to love the ...

Heya :) Here to review... duh. :wink: Hazel irises stared expectantly into my dark green Is there a word missing here...? Or am I just being dumb? :lol: . "Uh...." ...

Here to review as requested :) The Quarter The late afternoon breeze is chilly with the coming winter. He feels the cold deep in his joints, hands fumbling with the ...

Hey there RK! Here to review, obviusly. :wink: The rays of the sun once again beat down on the village. The great big burning ball had risen once again to ...

I just had to review this. As you can see by my username, I am obsessed with Skins :wink: Black, nothingness... I could see nothing... I wanted to move but ...

Hey there Kaedee 8) Here to review as requested. How could he feel so free to bang on my window? I didn't really understand this. What does being free have ...