Sins

Heya Princess :D It's me, back for your last review! As you’re aware, I've read the previous chapters before this one and I'm going to give you an overall review ...

Heya again! I loved this chapter. :D You got some really good action into this chapter and you did so very effectively. One of the things that I really liked ...

Wassssaaap XD :D I do have to say that I think you're chapters are improving as they go on! This is certainly a good chapter, in my opinion. I'm really ...

Heyaa :D I actually liked this chapter a lot because of the length of it. It feels quite a bit less rushed than some of the previous parts of this. ...

I bet you didn't expect to see me... did you? :lol: I have to admit, this is probably one of my favourite chapters so far. The main reason for that, ...

Heeeey 8) Not an awful lot happened in this chapter so I probably won't have much to say about this. I will try my best though to try and find ...

Hey again! I'll get straight to the critiques for this one, I think. My main critique for this chapter would probably be the same as my main critique in my ...

Yo. 8) I'm sure that you know the drill by now! I'll begin by saying that I think that this is an improvement compared to the first part of this ...

'Tis me again. :xd: Like in my previous review on the first chapter, this review will be rather brief and I'll just get straight to the point. I'm hoping to ...

Heyoooo :D I'm really sorry this has taken me so long... I've had loads of things to do lately and I haven't really been able to do any kind of ...

Right... okay. *Cough* I could make out the beginning where it said, Dead tree at dusk ... but that's about it. WOOP. Unless it doesn't even say that and I'm ...

Heya Flower :) "You can't leave me," the words slipped fervently from my lips , You don't need this comma. for what seemed like the thousandth time. I could once ...

Heya austenite :D It's reviewing day, so yeah... I'm here to review. You've already gotten some nice reviews, so I'll try not to repeat anything that's already been said unless ...

Heyaaa :) 'Cause I'm cool, I'm going to review this for you. I'll start off the review with any nit-picks that I have for you, or any grammatical errors that ...

Heya Spork :D I'm her to review as requested. Gryphon's already given you a very good review so I'll try not to repeat what he's said unless I think that ...