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Heya Lord. :) I'm here to review as requested. I'm not going to blabber on, which I do very often, and instead, I'll just get straight onot the reveiew! If ...

Hey Lindsey! :) I'm here to review this as requested. I'm not going to do a nit-picky review, if that's okay with you. If you have any questions or comments ...

Me again! ^^ It feels weird reading this after reading and reviewing the third chapter. I'm sure that you know the drill by now, so I'll just get straight to ...

Hey Roal! :) I'm here to review this for you. Hopefully, I'll have hardly any critiques now that you've edited this. We'll see! If you have any questions or anything ...

Rachael! I'm not only here to make it obvious how useless I am at critiquing your writing, but to let you know that I still love this! :P I feel ...

New avvie! I love! TAIGA. I was excited to review this, just so that I could say that, ya know. I shall repeat what Punk said by informing you that ...

Heya! :) I'm here to review as requested. The title of this story amuses me because it's actually the name of the first Storybook I was in, funnily enough. Anyway, ...

Yo! Benny Boy! Can I call you that....? :lol: I'm here to reveiw this as requested, believe it or not. As you're aware, I know nothing about non-fiction stuff, but ...

I have returned for the last review! Dun, dun, duuuuun... With any luck, I'll be able to give you a bit of a better review than my last one. This ...

It's me again! x3 You know the drill now. I'll give you a review on this chapter, and when it comes to the next one, I'll see if I can ...

Hey kaka! I'm here to review this for you. Okay, because you've got three chapters so far, I'm going to give you two rather brief reviews on the first two ...

Hey JRS! I haven't done a nit-picky review in a while, so I think I might give you one. If you have any questions or comments about my review when ...

Hey watchmeburn! I'm here to review this like you asked! I'm not sure if I can get to your poem because I have quite a few review requests, plus your ...

Shubhi! Hey. :) You should have told me that you'd posted this! I saw on the novel's old page that you were continuing it by yourself, but I didn't know ...

HAI. I'm late. D: Youv'e already gotten one of Azila's never ending, totally epic reviews, so I may be a little stuck here... I shall try and help you though! ...