Sins

Late to the party, but eyyyyyy (this better happen or I'll individually hunt you all down)

Okay so usually I'm like oh, I'll totally do NaNo this year in my head, and then proceed to do nothing. So. This is me putting down in writing that ...

Sheen

CAKE

8.5/10 I like, Lumi. I like. Admittedly, I had to google the definition of leukeran, but that's a me problem. In all seriousness, I love what your sentence implies and ...

6/10 I like how your sentence gets straight into the action. It's not cliché, the description's pretty good and it does manage to interest me. The reason I haven't scored ...

9/10 I love the drama of it. It gets me wondering about the character being spoken of. Did he burn the place he called home? Is he escaping from it? ...

8/10 I'm very impressed because descriptive openings aren't my favourite kind but this has really caught my interest. And to catch Skinsy's interest... well, all I can do is applaud ...

Best thing: Ummm, I guess I'd have to say characterisation. One compliment I often find myself getting is that my characters seem realistic and my readers get attached to them ...

*Breathes life to thread* 9/10. Very intriguing. This line gives you a sense of what kind of story could be lying ahead and it makes you curious about what's actually ...

OMGOMGOMG. I WANT ONE. In case you haven't noticed, I like cats, and although this one isn't ginger, I still want to stroke his face. I'm guessing his name is ...

This actually makes me want to marry you. Sorry to sound like one of those annoying OMG UROCK! I lllllluuurrrv yoooouuuu!!!!! people, but I seriously love this! I most definitely ...

daaaaaang... you ever tried drawing this dudes mouth? It's hard! D: I UNDERSTAND YOU. Before I comment on this properly, can I just say that I want whatever pencils you ...

So I haven't drawn anything in over six months now, and this is the first thing I've created that I'm at least somewhat happy with in a while. As I ...

I luuurrrv these! :D These are pretty hard things to critique for a few reasons. To begin with, they're awesome, so it's hard anyway. The other thing that makes it ...