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Re: Chapter Three- Not Here
I'm finally here to review this, Coral! Okay! You told me that these first three parts are actually all one chapter, right? I'm glad to have heard that because I ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Sand is (1st and 2nd drafts included)
Heya, Silented. :) You've already gotten some lovely reviews here, so I might end up struggling a little. Plus, I think that this is actually very good, so I might ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Jealousy of the Sand
Hey, Flower! :) I'm not sure if I'm going to be much help here, if I'm honest. You've already gotten reviews that have pointed out things that I also noticed... ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
Heya, Shubs! :) Could you review the first chapter of my novel for me? Please and thank you!
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Free Reviews
Hey, blue. :) Would you mind checking out the first chapter of my novel for me...? There's a prologue, but you shouldn't desperately need to read that, I don't think. ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Ali's Hot Dogs *Edited*
Heya, Eli. :) I always like reviewing contest entries... It makes me feel more pumped up. Weird, I know. Hey, I'm a creeper. I had a look at the contest, ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Cassa-de review-ae
YOUR FACE. Will you review that for me? It's the first chapter of my novel, brev. It will guarantee you love... Please and thank you!
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Chapter Two- Not Here
Why hello there... :twisted: Like I said, I'm here to review this second chapter. It will probably be my last review of the day because I should really be in ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Done! 8)
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Foretold (Prolouge +Chapter 1)
Heya aweqs. :) You've already gotten some good reviews here, so I'm not sure if I'll have much more to add. Because of that, this review could be a little ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
All done! :P
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Chapter One- Not Here
Me again! :twisted: Okay... I know you told me to pick either your poem or this, but I can't resist... I seriously loved your poem, and it would eternally haunt ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Bouquet of Bruises
Yo! 8) I actually looked at this poem half an hour or so before you asked me to review it... Creepy. Anyway, yeah! Here I am to review it! Is ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani Chapter 8(Summary Included)
Heya idraax. :) I think that this review may be a little short... sorry... The piece itself is a little short and I don't really have much to critique you ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: To all my best friends on YWS.
Haha, that's so cool! :) You're so sweet... xD I can't believe I've only now spotted this, especially considering this is on the featured works! I have no idea why ...
Nov 22, 2010