Sins

Fair point.

No mention of you being secretly ginger... D:

Hey Angel. :P I'm here to review as requested! You've got some nice reviews already, so hopefully, I'll be able to give you a critique on something that hasn't already ...

Austin André Death. It can rest on a single blade, a single action. One decision, one movement, and death could welcome you. I'm not scared of death. No matter how ...

Good point, Aqua... :lol: I'd say about 17(ish) Spekaing of age... Can all characters be between the ages of 15 and 21, please.

Because I'm cool, I'm going to use my MC from the novel this SB is actually based on. Also, I can't make guesses to who the murderer is, due to ...

Chasing Ghosts You're out with your friends one night doing nothing particularly special. That is until something serious happens, something deadly serious. That night, you find a body beside an ...

Xavier ap Ganthi -- Loner "What are you?" A male elf. A horrible species. Was he mocking us? I stared at the man, my annoyance turning into confusion. Was he ...

All done!

Heya Spike. :) I'm here to review as requested, but it seems that you've already gotten two reviews by two wonderful reviewers. I'll try and avoid repeating what they've said, ...

Heya Valentine. :) I remember that the last review you gave me was really helpful, so I was wondering if you'd review something else for me. It's the beginning of ...

Hey there, crafty. :) I was wondering if you'd review something for me... hence why I'm posting here. x3 It's the beginning of my novel. Right now, I've got two ...

What's happened during Charlie's life in this novel so far: Charlie Black was out with two friends, including his best friend, Austin, when a fight occurred. It resulted in Austin ...

Hey Crafty. :) As I'm sure you know, non-fiction isn't my high point when it comes to critiques. Taking that into account, I can't guarantee that this review will be ...

Heya. :) I reviewed the old version of this, I think, didn't I? It'll be interesting to see how this one compares to the older version, even though the older ...