Sins

Why, hello there. Okay, so overall, I thought this was pretty good. You had some really good imagery in this short story and you managed to portray the MC's emotions ...

Yourface. Yourturtleface. I'm kind of disappointed that you wrote this because I was getting excited at the idea of Ranger setting me free to attack you. Ah well, another time, ...

Yo. Sup. *nods* Because of your lack of posting (shame on you ;)), I may be a little rusty when I review this. I've had to remind myself of who ...

Hidere. I know you well enough to know that you don't like nit-picks, so I won't bother doing any. ;) I NO U. Sorry, I'm in a funny mood because ...

Yellooo! I think this is going to be more of a quick comment rather than a review because like I warned you, I'm rather suckish at reviewing edited things. :P ...

Me again. :P This review's going to be even more suckish than the last one... xD The chapter itself is pretty short, so I can't guarantee that I'll be able ...

It's meeeeeeeeeee! Hai. Okay, so I'm pretty sure you've edited this quite a bit since a lot of the reviews. I think you've done a really great job too! I ...

What's happened in this novel so far: Austin, Charlie Black's friend, is responsible for accidentally stabbing and killing a young girl. A few weeks had passed after the stabbing when ...

Yo! 8) I'm not going to do nit-picks or anything because they're not really my thing. Is that alright? If you do want nit-picks or anything, just let me know! ...

My cat. The rest of you are alright too. JK. ;) I don't know if I've ever posted in here before, so if I have and I'm repeating names here, ...

Yooooo! Okay, well, cC has given you such an awesome review... well, reviews really. :P It'll certainly be interesting to see if I have anything to add, hehe. This for ...

Hidere. This will probably be more of a passing comment than a review because I always suck at reviewing edited things. This will probably just be full of compliments anyway... ...

I'm aliveeeee! I'm awfully sorry this has taken me ages to get to, especially after saying I could do it... Monday, was it? So yeah, sorry! I'm not sure how ...

Tanya, you babe. Don't worry, I'm not hitting on you. You've got a man, plus you're knocked up with Skinsy junior. Hitting on you would be bad. And lesbianish. Sorry ...

I luuurrrv these! :D These are pretty hard things to critique for a few reasons. To begin with, they're awesome, so it's hard anyway. The other thing that makes it ...