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Re: The Neverending Love Song
Wow that is beautiful! Out of all of the poems I've read on this site I can easily say that this is my favourite! I love it because the way ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Stand by me
It all felt so perfect. But later we lost it. Now life feels so empty. And no one can save me. What's the point in carrying on? When everything I ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Warning: Sappy, may cause loss of apetite or vomitting
I would definitaly agree that thiis poem isn't sappy at all! It flows soperfectly, so gently and you are clearly a skilled writer. It gives me a clear image in ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: To Society:
I love the way you have written this. It really makes you think, well it definitely made me think! I understand this poem because my cousin is gay and ever ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: “Full stop”
I love your writing style. It is a very uniqe style and that is something I love. Individuality. Although I must say that it took me quite a while to ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: The last night
The Last Night If this is the last night Then I'm going to do it right Either the night will never end Or my heart will never mend The thought ...
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Re: Section of a story
This is the prologue of the story I'm writing. Please review! That night was when the nightmares began. I dreamt I was in Andrea's house, but it was empty. I ...
Apr 5, 2009
