Sins

April 8th, 9:08 Wednesday My bedroom Great. I've just had some wonderful news from the almighty(otherwise known as my dad). We're not going anywhere on holiday this year. I swear ...

This is very good! I especially love the first stanza because the way you describe it creates perfect images inside my head and you descriptions are extremely good as well. ...

This was great! I love how your pom starts off with a sombre mood but then towards the end of the poem the mood changes and ends up lighter at ...

I really enjoyed that :) It sends a good message and it's a very clever and very interesting poem to read. I especially like your writing style. I also like ...

Part of me was dreading the thought of spending my Saturday in a house full of posh snobs but part of me was surprisingly looking forward to it. When Hayley ...

I love this! It's such a simple subject but it's so effective! I've already commented on this but I would like to comment some more. (Yes, I am a freak) ...

Hey :D That was beautiful! I ecspecially like the lines Love is the tender war that leaves a blissful mess; The more you give away the more you possess... Those ...

Wow, this is a lovely not disgusting story at all! :P I thought it was great! Once I started reading it I had to read more! I can't think of ...

That was really good. I understand how you're feeling and your message is very clear. I know that love hurts but you've just got to move on and try and ...

That first night went by quite quickly come to think of it. I arrived at Sunset around one o clock, so within a few hours the rest of the kids ...

This is great! You have a very good writing style and the story is very well written. When I started reading it I couldn't stop! It was so creepy it ...

I know that this isn't the best beginning but I would like to know what I could improve. Thank you :) Home. Home is just a word to me. No ...

I wish I could write lyrics like you! The way you've written your lyrics is so natural and doesn't feel forced at all. I love it because the first verse ...

I loved this! I can't really criticize you for anything! I'm not very good when it comes to grammar but I'm pretty sure that you don't have many grammar mistakes. ...

I loved this poem! It's simple yet very interesting and well written. I liked the way you used blank to rhyme with ink. I thought it work rather well! It ...