Sins

I loved this! Your poem had great rhythm and I could follow it easily and understnad what you were trying to say the whole way through it! I'm probably just ...

I know that this poem is a bit 'samey' but I would greatly appreciate your opinions! :D Longer than Forever Like the moon cannot rise until the sun has set, ...

I really liked that! It was a really sweet poem and I love your writing style. I like the opening paragraph because it shows how you started off not minding ...

Ye, the fringe is the front of your hair!

Thanks for the reviews guys! Keep them coming! They really help! Meg x-x :D

I'm writing this as it is coming into my head so don't expect anything amazing! :wink: The second it went into me it stung. It stung badly. I suddenly fell ...

April 13th Monday 9:33 Last week I met the angel of hotness(high point of my entire life). I haven't written in here for like four days or something because I've ...

I really liked this I feel like I'm involved in the story and I really do like your main character. Most people have pointed out the less positive things about ...

I really liked this I really do like your main character. This is a very entertaining story. It is very hard to write from the point of view of someone ...

I really liked this I feel like I'm involved in the story and I really do like your main character. I did notice though that there were a few letters ...

April 16th, 12:58 Thursday Boys. Something that every teenage girl has to put up with. Except for me. I haven't had a boyfriend in my entire life! Yes, you should ...

April 10th, 11:15 Friday I need my haircut. My fringe is literally down to my chin. I look like one of those chubacka things from Star Wars. I asked mum ...

I really like this! The flow in it is very good. I like many parts of the poem but I would probably have to say that my favourite part is ...

I really like this! The flow in it is very good. I like many parts of the poem but I would probably have to say that my least favourite part ...

I really like this! The flow in it is very good. I like many parts of the poem but I would probably have to say that my favourite part is ...