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Re: The girl in the background
I'm not to sure about this :? I would appreciate your reviews! Rip it to shreads if you want! The girl in the background Her words are lost, they're silenced ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Tree of deceit
Hey x I really like this! People have already basicly said what I'm about to say but I'll repeat it anyway becasue I feel like I need to! I absolutely ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Can I brake?
Hey x I really did love this! It wasn't majourly long and boring so it suited me well! I agree with Time8Keeper that my favourite three lines of the poem ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: You think you know her
Thanks for the reviews guys, they really help! I've tried to polish it up a bit and hopefully it's a little better! Once again thanks for the reviews. Your friend, ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: When the elderly rebel
Now this is what I call random. I was on a road trip and I got seriously bored, I mean seriously bored. I was suffering from lack of imagination and ...
May 17, 2009 -
Re: Stuck in the Past: Part Three (Edited)
I really liked this! I'm not a very good critique so I wouldn't take my review to seriously! But even though that is true I will try to do the ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: C'est La Vie
I really liked this! It was rather depressing, obviously, but I still loved it. It was dramatic and it really made me think about what was happening. I'm not a ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: I cannot cry
I cannot cry, cos my eyes are running dry. I fake a smile to hide the pain, the misery, the hate, But I can't forget it, no matter how hard ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: What he doesn't know
I really liked this! It was really interesting and I realluy did love it. It was dramatic and it really made me think about what you were saying. I'm not ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: deleated
I really liked this! It was rather depressing, obviously, but I still loved it. It was dramatic and it really made me think about what you were saying. I'm not ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: Pretty Little China Doll
I made this up as I was going along, that's why the end is crappy! :P Taylor Pritchard stared blankly out of the cold window. She watched the glistening raindrops ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: Unnatural
I really liked this! It was rather depressing, obviously, but I still loved it. It was dramatic and it really made me think about what you were saying. I'm not ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: Elegy of a Dead Man
I really liked this! It was rather depressing, obviously, but I still loved it. It was dramatic and it really made me think about what you were saying. I'm not ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: Familiar ~ Section of a story
Oh! And sorry it's a bit long :?
May 10, 2009 -
Re: Diary of a teenage disaster 5
lol! I put pervy price because there is actually a teacher in my school who we call that! That's who I based pervy parker on! :lol:
May 10, 2009