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Wow... at first, it actually reminds me of the dentist... :elephant: NO. ¬_¬ I'm not a fan of the dentist... Cool name though! :lol: Mines rubbish, I want to change ...

Wow! Really pretty Forest! :D This is me :smt004 I'm ginger in this picture though... hair dye gone wrong :thud: And sorry it's upside down...

Heya :) Stelagineva has pointed out most of the grammar mistakes, so I won't say them again! All though, grammar isn't my strong point anyway, so I wouldn't listen to ...

Heya :) I actually agree with Elinor Brynn! I found your use of "it" effective. Everyone's entitled to their own opinion I suppose, eh? :wink: All though, at times, it ...

There are quite a few things that I really need to improve on! I'm aware that I need to press harder with the pencil, for example. Sorry about the size, ...

Hey, I haven't been on YWS in ages! I was never much of a writer and I'm even worse now! :lol: Anyway, critiques are greatly thanked :wink: Meg xoxox Just ...

Hey x I quite enjoyed this XD I agree with the other comment that the story is rather confusing, maybe it's the first night of her job as a hooker? ...

Hey x I quite enjoyed this XD I agree with the other comment that the story is rather confusing, maybe it's the first night of her job as a hooker? ...

This story seriously needs help :? and I would appreciate any help that it does get! :wink: You will be able to tell as you read on, that writing is ...

I know how you guys feel! There's a poem I've written from before I joined this site and it is absolutely TERRIBLE! It's got no rhythm and the rhyming is ...

This poem seems a bit 'off' to me but I can't really put my finger on what exactly :? Please help! My big brother You showed me the things I ...

Hey Lydia x Could you please review my fiction after you've done Fortuna's? Thanks in advance :wink: Meg xoxo

I adored this! It was emotional, original and extremely well written! I especially love the theme of this poem, it really does make a person think. I have to agree ...

Hey x Could you please review the first chapter of my fiction? Thanks in advance :D Yours truly, Meg xoxo

Hey x I'm nt sure if you're still using this thread but if you are, could you please review my fiction? It's the first chapter of my story. :) It's ...