Sins

Charlie Some of the guys here are hysterical! A bit touchy... but still, hysterical. Especially that Burns guy, he thinks he's so hard with that gun. I'm looking at him ...

He was warm okay AspiringAuthor? ¬_¬ :lol: As for yours, 7/10

Charlie Jesus Christ. These guys have bad tempers. That chick has a serious issue with fire! I wonder if she'd be afraid of my lighter... that would be funny to ...

Hey there Portersrose :) Awesome picture by the way :lol: This story was pretty good, in my opinion! It wasn't incredible, but it wasn't terrible either! One thing you do ...

Charlie "Yo! Wassup homies!" I Shout cheerfully, laughing, as I walk into the old pub. Everyone's looking at me. I look at the bar. There's a man sitting at it, ...

Hey there Darkness :smt001 Everyone has pretty much pointed out every nit-pick, and they've pretty much mentioned everything else as well! So I'm just going to agree to what they've ...

Lmao Ranger :lol: The more pictures of him, the better! At least we've both got good taste :wink: I find this one funny!

Hey Dreamy 8) Could you please review the first chapter of my story for me? It's short, I noticed that you like short ones :wink: As for your harshness, don't ...

Hey there Mr.Knightly! :) Can you please review the first chapter of my story? Just don't expect anything amazing! :lol: Thanks. xoxo Skins :smt002

I'm not sure whether this should be the prologue or the first chapter... what do you guys think? I was seven years old when I first met my older sister; ...

8/10 :) I really liked the metaphor you've used. "I was six when I first met my older sister. My deceased older sister that is."

Tapping the woman that had just walked in, I say. "Excuse me, that's extremely rude!" She simply laughs in my face. All of a sudden, a man with dark hair ...

Yeah... I always pass out when I see lots of blood. That's me for you, a freak :wink: Like someone else said, when I pass out, I can't recall the ...

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8/10 It made me curious, I must say! :D "A small smile spread across my face as I watched a clear, crystal wave bash against the hard rock’s of the ...