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Hey there fiction! :) I really liked your story! Your writing was putting images into my head, which is an extremely good thing to be able to do. I agree ...

Hey there Kylan! :) I have to say, I adored this poem! To be perfectly honest, I can't really find any negative points to say about it. Like others have ...

Hey there TenYo! :) Like the other reviewers have said, I really liked your poem! Agreeing with Kinghtley, I am so glad to be reading a positive poem for once. ...

Hey there Kineta! Welcome to YWS! :) Before I get on to the review, I want to remind you to make sure that you do some reviews as well! I ...

Hey there :) I think that this is a pretty nice poem! There are some errors, as the other reviewers have pointed out though. Like Kamas said, you have a ...

That's perfectly fine Ranger! :smt004

Cry :cry:

Hey there Blink :) Could you please review my fiction? It's pretty short so it won't take long! Thanks xoxo Skins

Never done one of these in my entire life. So yeah, this'll be interesting :wink: And by the way curiousvampire, I was going to use Mitch Hewer... grrr... :lol: Name: ...

That is all. Someone is obsessed. You know it. xD haha! :lol:

Hey there :) Like Elinor and Tassen have said, this was a really nice little poem! As I take my last breath I also agree though with Elinor on the ...

You get a towel. *Inserts coin*

Miley Cyrus! ¬_¬

Thanks for the reviews guys :) I've noticed that I have an issue with commas. I always have, it's really annoying! Practice makes perfect I suppose! The MC's a boy ...

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