Sins

Hey there Isha! Welcome to YWS! There are loads of great people here on YWS, I'm sure you'll make loads of good friends. Like shubhiloves2write said, PM me if you ...

I completely agree with Nate. That's all I have to say.

Hey there :) I thought that your poem was pretty good! It was original, which is a very good thing and you portrayed some very good emotion in your writing. ...

Ollie Come on, she's gorgeous. How can you not like her? I thought, looking at Alexis. She's pretty, she's funny, she's cool. Why don't you fancy her? The truth was ...

Hey there :) I thought that this chapter was great. It's made me want to read the other twelve now! Well done for doing that. :wink: The other reviewers have ...

Hey there! :) I have to admit, I loved your poem! I agree with your comment on the start. You have clearly put a lot of effort into this. Well ...

Hey there :) I enjoyed reading your poem! It wasn't incredible, but I definitely think that you have potential. I agree with Elinor when she said that the voice in ...

Charlie "Awww! Has your girlfr..." I pause. " Boyfriend broken up with you?" "Do you ever shut up?!" Burns is getting angry now. He grabs the beer that he just ...

Charlie What is up with these people and guns? The closet thing I have to a gun is a water pistol... "Now there's no need to be rude to the ...

You get a pedophile. *Inserts coin*

Sorry if I don't post anything the same time as everyone else. I'm aware that most of you, if not all, live in America. Because of this, I would have ...

Hey :) You could review the next part of mine if you want :lol: xoxo Skins

Once again, this is a rough draft! This one I am really not too sure about at all, especially compared to the first chapter. I always struggle with the beginning ...

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Today I tried buttering my toast with a spoon because I couldn't find a knife. Advice: Use the bottom of the spoon. That is all. :smt005