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Re: The Character Tavern
Charlie Wow. What a load of freaks.
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: The Character Tavern
Charlie Superhuman. Pfft. Overrated. I have a rat that lives in my room called Peter. I bet he doesn't. "Okay Mr. Superhumanmutationorgasmdude, at which point will you need to shoot ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Just Another Day
Ollie I stepped into Lydia's car and sat next to her. After thinking about it, the quicker I got home to my idiot of a father, the better. As Lance ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: And What About Tomorrow?
I agree with Stori. Wow. :lol: Your writing skills are amazing! If I could write like you, I'd be dancing around my house! Seriously though, I can't really find any ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: Suggestions Needed!
Hey there :) There are plenty of good books around! One of my favourite authors is Malorie Blackman. She's written loads of great books. Some of my favourite books of ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: There Once Was A Girl Named Jennifer June
Hey there Treehugger :) I have to agree with David. I really loved your poem! I also agree with the fact that it felt like I was reading a story, ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: You make me wanna feel
Hey there :) I really did enjoy reading your poem! You portray various emotions very well, and put loads of vivid, interesting pictures into my head. Your lines seemed to ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: The Character Tavern
Charlie "Oooo! Touchy!" I laugh. Burns narrows his eyes at me. This guy clearly doesn't have a sense of humour. I have to admit, This is fun. "My name is ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: Just Another Day
Ollie Peter kept on looking at me. He was probably more interested in Alexis, but it made me feel awkward. Alexis and I were talking about something, I didn't know ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: Show Me
Hey there Forestqueen :) You're in the same storybook as me aren't you? 8) I must say, I did enjoy reading your poem. Although, it was a bit on the ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: The Nymph
Hey there David :) I have to say, I really enjoyed reading your poem. I love your use of imaginary, it was really effective. Well done for that. :wink: Although, ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: fear.
Hey there samiam :) I've noticed that you haven't done any reviews so far. I don't want to sound like a miserable saddo or anything, but it's a nice idea ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: My Bloody Valentine Reviews
Title: Can You See Me? Genre: Fantasy Fiction (Don't worry, no vampires) Length: About a page and a bit (Sorry for not being specific) Link: I hope you can do ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: Have a Peanut!
Hey there :) Could you review this for me please? Thank you :wink: xoxo Skins
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: Just Another Day
Ollie Alexis had a good voice. A really good voice actually. Danielle was good too, but Alexis was better. While the two of them were singing, I couldn't help but ...
Mar 22, 2010
