Sins

A Daydreamer :wink:

Hey there singerofthenight! :) I really did enjoy reading your poem! You used description very well, and I loved your use of effective imaginary. It was really original and unique. ...

Hey there fiction :) I really liked your poem! It was descriptive, full of imaginary and you used some really good language! Well done for that! Slipping away form me ...

A toilet seat in the middle of the night :smt005

Pfft. I'm wearing nothing. 8) Not really... I'm wearing pyjamas :wink:

Ollie I knew this was a bad idea. I just knew it. What was I supposed to say to Alexis? Literally. I wasn't even sure myself what was wrong with ...

Hey there Isha! :) I have to agree with the other reviewers, I loved your poem! It was descriptive, full of emotion and it had a really nice rhythm to ...

Oh... I thought Regan was a dude... Come on, it sounds like a guys name! And anyway, maybe Regan would say something like that. I bet the woman dances around, ...

Charlie At least there is one person here that doesn't control mutations or orgasms... or whatever they call it. And who the hell is Regan?! I'm a teenager. Not psychic. ...

Hey there :) Your poem was quite good. One of my main problems with it though was that it wasn't really very descriptive. I've definitely read a lot worse when ...

Hey there Lilyan! :) Skins here. Welcome to YWS! I'm sure you'll be made to feel at home here. There are plenty of helpful, nice people around. If you have ...

Hey there :) Your poem was quite good. My main problem with it was the fact that it was a bit on the repetitive side. Like Hannah said, you seem ...

You get a pensioner named Dorris.

Charlie "Jesus Christ..." I say, shaking my head. "Is there anyone here that isn't a bloomin' superhuman?!"

Ollie I didn't really want to go out with Alexis to be honest. It wasn't that I didn't like her or anything, it was just that I made a complete ...