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Oh. My. God. Galerius. Jesus Christ... You are HOT . You put Zac Efron to shame...

Hey :) This is pretty good in my opinion! The only problem that I have is that the picture seems to be focused on you. The diamond is kind of ...

Yum... :wink:

9/10 I think that you have a seriously good idea there! It's original and it's definitely the kind of thing that I'd read. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------

This thread died. HaHa, now it hasn't :wink:

Heya Red/Scar/Scarface/SF! :lol: I'm going to be an outcast and call you Scarlet :wink: I never realised that you were an Aussie o.O You are officially awesome now, well awesomer!

You get a severed finger. :D *inserts coin*

hahaha! :lol: This is actually IMENSE! It was so weird it was hilarious! Seriously well done! I would start critiquing, but I didn't notice anything negative... I was too, busy ...

Hey there :) I thought that this was pretty good! You definitely have potential and I do like your writing style. I do have to agree with Snoink though. It's ...

Hey Mo :) Like others have said, I think that this is great! It's original and I really like the idea. It's really clever, well done. :wink: I also agree ...

Charlie "Parker, you're late." The gym teacher spat in my face. I hadn't bothered to learn his name. I just called him Brian instead, it was easier. "Nah, you're all ...

9/10 I want that bunny rabbit! o.O

Hey there Brooke :) Welcome to YWS! I'm sure you'll find some good friends here, I definitely have. If you have any questions or anything, just PM me or contact ...

Hey there lisa :) Welcome to YWS, I'm sure you'll be made to feel at home here! You're welcome to PM me or contact me if you have any questions ...

Hey Kitty :) Not sure if you like doing Art and Photography, but could you review my photo please? Thanks :wink: