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Re: Designer Children, Why or Why Not?
It wouldn't work. Humans would lose individuality and eventually, we'd all be a bunch of mindless clones. "I want my child to like this and that so we can be ...
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Re: Hot Guys and Girls
Christofer Drew and Alex Evans crush other guys. They're still hot though... :smt005
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Evi's Evaluation Emporium!
Hey Evi :) Could you review this for me please? It's a random chapter,of my fantasy fiction. Is that okay? Thanks, xoxo Skins
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Re: A Nice Review Made Just for You!
Hey Esther! :) Will you review this for me please? Also, could you review some of the other chapters of it? If you can be bothered, that is! If not, ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch. 4
Hey again Esther :) I'm here for the last review 8) Alex’s expression while waiting for the princess to enter the throne room was one of extreme boredom. He slouched ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two)
Thanks for the reviews guys! I really appreciate them. I agree with you Dreamy. I thought that this was a big jump from the first chapter. The problem is though, ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Three)
Okay! Just to warn you, this is pretty long. I think it is anyway! I've been pretty happy with my last few chapters, but this one... not so happy. :? ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Secrets of a School
Joseph Maybe I should go after him...? I thought to myself. He seemed pretty upset and I had been a bit me... What was wrong with me? I mean, I ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: The Resistance
Thanks for the profiles guys, I appreciate it :) xxx
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
I've managed to review the first three! I'll definitely get back to the fourth one as well. I've got to go now though, my brother wants the computer :| EDIT: ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch.3 (review!)
Hey! For the third time, :wink: You know the drill, nitpicks! The carriage that was carrying the princess was late to arrive. It would sound better as, The carriage that ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch. 2
Hey again! :) Once again, I'll start with the nasty bits :wink: “At least horses obey the physics of the known world and don't not fly through air dramatically whenever ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever.
Hey Esther! Here as requested :wink: I'm going to start off with my least favourite bit, the nit-picks! “Y-you are impossible!” the princess quavered. This should be, T he princess ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Secrets of a School DT
kk :wink:
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Secrets of a School DT
Are we still going to do it so that Joseph's partly responsible? Like he taught Jezabel a spell that killed her or something?
Apr 12, 2010