Sins

Hey guys ^_^ I've never posted anything in advanced critiques before, so I thought I'd give it a go! This is a pretty short novella. It's humorous fiction, (Well, supposed ...

Hey :) Thanks for posting this in my WRFF thread. I'm glad you did! I'll upload an attachment to this of my review/edit. Although, I have the most recent Microsoft ...

Hey napalmerski :) I've never actually done an advanced critique before, but I'm definitely up for it! I'll read your novella and get back to you as soon as possible. ...

Viola! :) I'm done with yours Danie! xxx

Hey again! :D Here for your last review! Maybe I'll finally be able to find something to critique in this one! Considering you don't have any reviews yet, I might ...

Hey again! I completely agree with Jabber... Like your first two chapters, I really can't find anything to critique! It's slightly annoying... :lol: I feel like I'm not helping at ...

Hey :) Once again... I don't really have anything to review here! This chapter was even better than the first one. You made me ask lots of questions, wanting to ...

Hey there Danie! :) I have to say, this was great! To be honest with you, I'm not going to critique anything. Mostly because there isn't really anything to critique! ...

Charlie Hm... I'm bored. I look around the crowded tavern until my eyes stop at the chick with the hood. There's another girl sitting next to her now. I cheerfully ...

Jospeh The small, attractive girl with long brown hair smiled. "Care for another player?" She said. "I'm Ivy by the way." "Hey," I winked at her, I reached out my ...

Is anyone still interested in this? If so, could some of you guys double up...? We need more guy characters.

10/10! Unlike Kamas, I am a flyleaf fan 8) B coz i am cool u c. God... I hate people who type like that...

Dawn

Thanks for the reviews guys :) Thanks for that comma link thing! I suck so badly when it comes to commas... They deeply confuse me... :| Knightley: As for the ...

Hey people :) We had a debate in my English class today about pregnancy and abortions. It got me thinking, so I decided to post it on here. I want ...