Sins

Rhodri "Everyone wake up. We will be in Vontaria within the next hour." A loud voice suddenly called. Groaning, I slowly opened my eyes to see the morning sunlight peering ...

Thanks for the feedback guys :) There are some really good points here. Also, no offence, but I read an article somewhere stating that countries with the highest teenage pregnancy ...

Hey Knightley 8) May I please have a review on my fourth chapter of Can You See Me? To me, this chapter's a bit of an epic fail... so yeah! ...

I'm really not too keen on this chapter... it's definitely my least favourite so far :? To be honest, it just feels a bit bland and pointless, I think. :xd: ...

Thanks for the reviews guys, I really appreciate it :) As for the comment about the dead people in the cemetery, it would have made a lot more sense to ...

I'll join this! If that's all right? :wink: Name: James (Jimmy) Moore Age: 18 Picture: Country and Global Location: Originally from Britain but has spent someyears in Greace. Languages You ...

Scar, swear words are fine. As long as you don't use them in every sentence, that would just be annoying. :wink: Mitchell - April 16, 6:23 pm "Oi, mate!" Some ...

Charlie I look at Kayla strangely as her tone of voice changed. Jesus, anger issues... She was pretty darn determined to get Alyssa to remove her hood. I didn't really ...

Banned for breathing :smt001

I was looking around my portfolio the other day and I found something that I'd completely forgotten about. It was a piece that I'd written, like, the month I joined ...

Okay, I'm going to try and start this now. :xd: The first section of the storybook will be based on the lyrics of this song - Uprising ~ Muse The ...

Yours is done Shubhi. Hope I was helpful, :wink: xxx

Thank you! :lol: Also, as for the reading mind comment, we'll just say that Rhodri projected his thoughts, like you said :wink:

Hey there shubhi! :D Here to review as requested. Red = Corrections Bold = My advise SEAN KERR 26th June 12:17 AM I was busy examining Amanda’s body while my ...

Hey again :) I'm not sure if you'll be willing to do this, but I may as well ask :wink: Could you review my novella? It's literally only 20 something ...