Sins

Hey RK! Here as requested :) Firstly, the nit-picks! The summer breeze washed over the village, covering the land in an unseen veil. I loved this as an opening sentence! ...

Yours is done Esther! :) I'll get onto yours now RK. Edit: I've completed yours now RK. Hope I was helpful :wink:

Okay, we're going now. If anyone who's posted a profile, but hasn't turned up, that's fine. We'll just meet your character along the way somewhere. Mitch "Everyone ready?" I asked, ...

Hey Esther! Here to review, my hecklberry friend 8) Alex stood outside Anita’s guestroom, his fist poised in preparation to knock on her door. He had definitely not planned to ...

Ew... That just screams obese children... :|

Yours is done SameOld! :D Anyone else fancy a review...? I feel lonely without them :xd:

Banned for using more than one word with over two syllables. You disgust me. :smt001

Jimmy I could feel my stomach turning nervously. Some of these guys seemed kind of aggressive. I didn't need a mirror to tell that I looked like some kind of ...

This is a good idea yeah, but why on a site called- 'the young writers society,' ? Why not? :wink: And besides, if the site was called 'The young writers, ...

Hey there SameOld! :) Here to review. I'll start off with the nit-picks. I looked at Will carefully , as he continued rubbing his nose. You don't need a comma ...

I'll give this a shot. Like Scar, I'll be editing my profile now and then. Is it okay if I add some stuff to the profile? Name: James (Jax) Pasquilo ...

What's even more bizarre is that where I live, the weather is really amazing. The sun is blazing and there are no clouds in the sky whatsoever. The fact that ...

I'll join 8) Name: Josie Ferguson (Nickname: Fergie) Age: 21 Appearance: Light blonde hair and light blue eyes. Fergie always wears a bow, whether it be in her hair, her ...

Jimmy "I look forward to seeing you, Alis. It was nice to hear from you again." I said. "Thats nice. See you Jimmy." Alis replies. Snapping my phone shut, my ...

Hey there :) This poem was really sweet! I especially like the layout of it. You ' r e sweet, you know, you really are. Your brown hair, blue eyes ...