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Hey Spera! :) Welcome to YWS! You're bound to make some great friends on this site. Like lava said, I'm sure you're not boring. It's not like you spend your ...

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You get your Amazon discount card spat back out. Then the machine cries. *Inserts coin*

I agree with DayDreams, I'm dull. Complicated things confuse me... :lol: Although, we could definitely consider the things you've suggested Pundit. I don't like any wand like item though to ...

Hey dragnet :) Don't worry about getting reviews straight away! This has only been up for almost two days :wink: I softly kissed him. His lips pressed back against mine ...

Jimmy I was beginning to regret ever coming here now. These guys had some serious anger issues. The more time I spent here, the more I realised how different I ...

Hey! :) I really liked this. It was cute and seriously neat! I really like the texture of your drawing, especially in the hair. I also like the colours that ...

You get a punch in the spline for smiling :xd: *Inserts coin*

Hey Firearris :) Could you review these? pretty please, with a cherry on top? ^_^ Can You See Me? Chapter One/Prologue Can You See Me? Chapter Two ~ Part One ...

Mitch The guy, who really needed to bathe, simply stared viciously at the girls behind me. "What are you lookin' at?" Mine hissed at him. This guy was seriously pissing ...

I think you might have missed the first part of chapter two ninja :wink:

Rhodri Austin, Donal and I dragged our bags down the hallway. The three of us and Alex were all sharing a room, although none of us were too sure where ...

Hey RK :) Fancy doing me a review? I think you've actually reviewed the second chapter of this, if I remember correctly. I don't like this chapter and would appreciate ...

She ran up and dove at him, as he caught her in his arms. It sounded fine to start off with, to be honest. What I said was more of ...

Yeah, to be honest, most of my comments were suggestions! I couldn't really find anything to critique :lol: Sure, I'll take a look at the preceding chapter. :) Edit: I'm ...