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Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Five)
Like usual... I'm not too sure about this... it seems 'off' :smt005 Also, I think this is going to be the last chapter I post of this on YWS. I ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Survive Chapter Three
Hey RK. Here for your review :wink: Forest Deep within the forest away from the village, a dark figure stirred. Oooo... I liked this opening sentence! :lol: A serpent slithered ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Till Death Do Us Part *Needs A LOT of Help!!!!*
Hey jas! Here to review :) I remember his strong arms that would wrap me in a hug when I needed it most. I remember his unusual green, hazel, blue ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Viola 8) Done yours shubhi, RK and jas! Anyone else?
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart Ch-4(part II)
Hey shubhi! Here for a review 8) CHLOE RUSSO 26th June 12: 54 AM We were forging ahead with the case. We had found some footprints which could possibly lead ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Vontaria Academy
Rhodri "Lunch time bwois!" I laughed, sitting down next to Alex. The girls giggled while the boys simply stared at me weirdly. I seriously needed to start cooling down a ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: The Resistance
Mitch "Cisco." Kiara smiled. "I'm Kiara." Smoothing the seat quickly, Kiara sat next to me. I must say, I was rather surprised to see her. I thought that she'd chickened ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Masquerade Brothers
This looks good! I'm in! I'll be a guy, considering there aren't any so far :wink: Name: Aston Prickard Age: 20 Gender: Male Personality: Aston is a selfish, uncaring guy. ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Seek and You Shall Find...A VERY Thorough Review Indeed
>>Skins: thanks for the chapters, and expect something over the weekend on the latest chapter. Are the chapters you PM'd me the most reworked and rewritten versions? Yeah, they are ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: This is disgusting (KFC)
Every time I see this picture, a part of me dies inside... :cry:
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Vontaria Academy
Rhodri "Yeah, you're probably right." I shrugged, looking at Austin. "Knowing me, I'll probably blow this place up or something." Magic's for freaks anyway, I thought to myself. I didn't ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: A YWS Storybook!
NO ONE can STOP ME!!! Yes they can. A mod can ban you, or at least report you. :wink:
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Out from the Sea
Jax Day 1, 4:15 I have mixed feelings about all of this. The ship itself is pretty darn nice! It is compared to my apartment, anyway. I haven't met the ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: The Last Dance (fixed)
Heya yuriiko :) Here to review! “Have you ever heard about the upcoming high school dance this Saturday, Amanda? And has anyone already asked you out to be their date ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Four)
Thanks for the reviews guys! I really appreciate them. :) borntobeawriter ~ Thanks for reviewing what I have so far in one go :lol: As for the whole, Damien brother-uncle ...
Apr 20, 2010
