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Re: Masquerade Brothers
Aston "Do you thinks will spark up here?" Saber asked offering me one of the glasses. Turning my attention back to her, I smiled. "Depends." I took the wine out ...
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: Anime + Realistic Works (Added More Pics- 4/27/10)
Do I post my pics in the same place or do I start a new forum? That's entirely up to you! :wink: Heya crescent 8) I thought that your drawings ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: 4-year old's normal bedtime
Hey! :) I'm no expert on scripts - not at all - but I really liked this! It made me giggle at the end and it's funny because it's so ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Polygamy
Personally, I don't think that polygamy is right. I think that it is disrespectful and, to be honest, pointless. I understand where you're all coming from though. What other people ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Dawn & Dusk Preface
Hey BottomlessEyes :) This is more of a comment than a critique, by the way. Any nit-picks or critiques have been covered by the other reviewers and you've edited it ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by an Aspiring Master (Closed)
I'm aware that I'm beginning to sound stalkerish here, but that's what makes me cool :) Anyway, fancy doing me another review on my novel/story? Can You See Me? Chapter ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Survive Chapter Three
haha yeah! I'd just stick with the lower case god thing if I were you... I'm not good with religion... :lol:
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Why thank you! :lol:
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Masquerade Brothers
Are our characters going to die...? Just wondering! Aston Prickard "I'm sorry..." The girl apologise, turning to face me. "Bloody hell! Watch where yo-" I paused when I noticed how ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Done yours etherealember :D Anyone else fancy a review? I'm hungry... :smt002 and the ham sandwich I just had didn't fill me up... :(
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: The Elephant in the Room - Edit
Heya :) Here to review again! I really like the title of this story, by the way! :lol: The Prince’s Ball was rumoured to be one unlike any other there ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Love From Afar - edit
Heya :) Here to review as requested! Poetry isn't my forte, but I'll give you the best review I can. This love from afar is bittersweet. I really liked this ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Done! 8) Anyone else want my amazingness...? :wink: And yes, amazingness is a word because I'm cool and I use cool words. :smt005
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: At your service!(BACK FOR BUSINESS)
Hey shubhi :) Fancy doing me another review? :wink: Can You See Me - Chapter Five Thanks! xoxo Skins
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Just 1411 left
Hey shubhi! :) Here to review as requested. Don't expect anything amazing though... I've never actually reviewed anything non-fiction before! :lol: I'll try my best though! ‘Just 1411 left!’ Were ...
Apr 22, 2010
