Sins

8/10 I'm liking the black and white 8)

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Viola! Yours is done KD! Next...? :wink:

Hey :) Could you review the next part of my story? You reviewed the previous chapter, if I remember correctly. Thanks in advance!

Well you could do another one for me if you want? :lol: It's another part of the last one you reviewed for me. Thanks :wink:

Thanks for the reviews guys, they are seriously helpful! I agree with everything you're all saying as well. I'm definitely going to revise and fix what needs fixing! I especially ...

Hey there Kaedee 8) Here to review as requested. How could he feel so free to bang on my window? I didn't really understand this. What does being free have ...

Jimmy "You're next." Alis said, making her way up the stairs. "She's not kidding, you know." I hear Ace's voice behind me. I can't help but laugh, along with a ...

Heya Biffle! :) I lay here. Nothing enters my mind. My eyes don't pick up anything but black. This is just a suggestion, but I think a different word would ...

Heya! :) This isn't going to be a very thorough critique, mostly because there isn't much to critique! Your grammar is pretty much perfect and I'm really liking this idea. ...

8/10 Very poetic :wink:

Banned for having an even number of reviews and posts :xd:

Yours is done Esther! Looking forward to the next chapter :wink: Anyone else...?

Hey Esther! :) Here to review... obviously :lol: Could it really be for the arrival of Anita and her brother? Alex pondered ; It surely was possible . A lthough ...

Aston Oh how I loved some of the jealous chicks at this party. Some girl just walked up to the me and started having a go at me! She wasn't ...