Sins

Banned for telling me to check out your Youtube... :thud:

Viola! I've finished yours now ninja! Anyone else fancy a review...?

Skins here (again) 8) Last review! I stalked to center stage first, random words spilling out of my mouth, stringing themselves together to form sentences that I yelled with as ...

Hey ninja! Me again :twisted: As had actually not been planned, David ran to the center of the hall and starting dancing with skill we didn't know he had. In ...

Hey ninja Les review... 8) "Well , then," Mr. Anderson said, You don't need the first comma here. He hurried back behind his desk, and the classroom broke into a ...

Why hello ther Apple, dear :twisted: Could you be ever so kind and review this for me please? It's the second chapter to my romance novel and it's a bit... ...

Heya! :) Looks like I'm your first request! If possible, could you review this for me please? It's the second chapter of a romance novel. Also, if it's not too ...

I've done the first two, I'll get on to the rest as soon as possible! :)

Hey ninja :) Here to review!!! I've got to be honest, I'm not really going to point out any nit-picks. Kaedee has given you a really, really good review and ...

Hey shubhi! Here to review, obviously :wink: I wiped off water from my face, looking at the wall constantly. This should be ~ I wiped the water from my face, ...

Hey ninja! Here to review as requested. :) His fingers twitched, as if trying to scoop up nonexistent hair product. I liked this line! He had grown to love the ...

Thanks for answering my question Kara! I'm glad it's not in the middle ages... technology ROCKS. :lol: Name: Cassie Age: 18 (No 27384092 but looks 18... she's actually 18.) :wink: ...

Sorry I don't post as often as I should! I'm trying to get into the swing of things, if ya get what I mean. Jimmy I wasn't stupid or anything; ...

May I please save a spot for a character...? :smt001 I was thinking a cook that doesn't eat? Could be interesting. Oh, and Is this based in the middle ages? ...

Hey Maddy! Me again. :twisted: Will you review this for me...? Pretty please? It's a second chapter, is that okay? If you feel you need to read chapter one, the ...