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Granted but now you just look sad. :smt001

Hey again :) Back for another review! Red = Corrections/negatives Blue = Things I like Bold = My comments JoJo ran across the hallway to the girls' washroom. It wasn't ...

Heya writingwords, shubhiloves2write suggested that I check this out, so here I am. 8) Red = Corrections Blue = What I like Bold = My comments Chapter 1 JoJo looked ...

Yay!

Hey there Elinor :) Could you please review someone else's work for me? It's by Lalaland. She could do with a good review and I know that yours are that ...

Heya! Here to review, obviously. :wink: “Home” is not something you’ve had to think a lot about. You’ve always told yourself, well, your parents love you, and you’ve got a ...

I'll give this a go :) Name: Douglas Lee Collins Nicknames: Dougie or Dougie Lee Age: 16 Gender: Male Appearance: Ice blue eyes and messy dark brown hair. He has ...

Pfft, sod the cliff; way too much effort. I'd rather get killed by some nutter chasing me. ~ Ollie ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ What would

Done jolene! Anyone else hungry to be reviewed...? :elephant:

Hey jolene :) I'm not going to mention any nit-picks. Any nit-picks that I would have mentioned have already been mentioned by other reviewers. You especially got a good one ...

Heya Elinor! :) You've reviewed quite a lot of my stuff, so I thought I'd finally pay you back! all's well that ends well a revered line from Shakespeare it's ...

I've finished yours Yuriiko! Next...? :xd:

Heya Lily :) Would you be ever so kind and review this for me please? It's the second chapter of a story, is that okay? Thanks in advance! If you ...

Heya yuriiko! Here to review as requested. 8) Red = Things I don't like :( Blue = Things I like :) Bold = My suggestions/comments Only hope I have to ...

Jimmy I stared at Alis as she emptied a bag full of weapons, ones that I didn't even know existed. There was going to be a heist for us 'newbies' ...