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Thanks a bunch for the reviews guys! I really need to check over my work before I post it. Fair play to me though on this chapter, I did post ...

Yeah, I get what you mean. Nowadays though, if a band wants to stay a band, they do have to kind of adapt to society. They do if they want ...

Yours is done Scarlette! I enjoyed reading it. :D Anyone else...?

Heya Scarlette :) Here to review as requested! I love your username, by the way... :D Red = Negatives/corrections Blue = Things I like Bold = My comments/suggestions “Would you ...

I was thinking that every member should be in the one tribe. I think that is what was intended in the first place, though? Yeah, that's what I assumed. Although ...

10/10 :elephant: I adore your name... :thud:

Lostprophets I myself am a huge Lostprophets fan. For those of you who have never heard of them, which is rather likely, they are a Welsh rock band. I want ...

8/10 I like names with Z's in them... :smt005

Can we start this soon? I don't want it to get crowded... :thud:

Hey RK :) Could you review this for me please? It's the second chapter of my romance novel. The link to the first chapter is in the post, if you ...

Heya Leth! I'm here to review... duh. :wink: Red = Corrections/negative Blue = Things I like Bold = My suggestions/comments I watched as the moon rose slowly over the horizon. ...

Michael Buble... yum... :thud: Now this is why I love Supernatural.

Jimmy I watched Eve as I drove my pick-up truck. She almost seemed as nervous as I did. She seemed to be constantly tapping her knees, and I couldn't help ...

8/10 Pretty! :smt005 Although I preferred your old one... What can I say? I'm a fan of Sweeney Todd!

Hey Lydia! You haven't got any reviews on this so far, so I thought I'd help you out. I haven't read the first few chapters so I'll probably fail epically. ...