Sins

Heya! You know the drill... :wink: I assumed the park where they told me to meet them at was Lions Park. No way was I going to search the entire ...

Your stalker (me) is back! :twisted: Will you review the latest chapter of my novel for me? You've reviewed some of the previous ones, so it should make some sense ...

Hey Maddy :) Sorry to bother you again but will you review a chapter of my story for me? I think you've reviewed a few of the previous chapters, so ...

Hey shubhi :) Could you review the next chapter of my novel please? Can You See Me? Thanks, :P xoxo Skins

Jimmy All of a sudden, the previously silent house, become terribly loud. I could hear people fighting upstairs; Alis and Sal obviously doing it eagerly. I on the other hand ...

Hey VeraWinters! Here to review. :) I'm surprised to see that no one has nit-picked you. Oh well, I guess that's my job in this case. So yeah, onto the ...

Honestly, I am a bit disappointed in the storybooks. It seems people won't join unless you have vampires or teenagers with superpowers. That's just wrong man. I really want to ...

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8/10 I like the song! The guy just creeped me out... :| Lostprophets ~ It's Not The End Of The World

This is going to be the last part of this novel that I put on YWS, I don't want to end up posting the entire thing on here now, do ...

Finished yours Jas! Sorry it dragged on... :roll: Anyone else...?

Hey jas! Here as requested, 'cause I'm cool. Red = Corrections/negatives Blue = Things I like Bold = My comments/suggestions Her hands were stuffed into her pockets, head bent but ...

Sorry I haven't posted in a while, I've been kind of busy and the time zones muck things up... :roll: Jimmy "Safe's upstairs. Go slow, travel in pairs, guns out. ...

Sorry my posting is a bit dodgy guys, stupid time zones. Indis, your posts aren't too long! I like long posts... :xd: As for ideas... not that I can think ...

8/10 I don't really get it... but like randomness... :smt001