Sins

I used to have a huge crush on Shadow the Hedgehog. Don't know if that counts.

6/10 I like how your sentence gets straight into the action. It's not cliché, the description's pretty good and it does manage to interest me. The reason I haven't scored ...

You guys are loads of help. Like, srsly. I know what you guys mean in terms of kiddies' intelligence. Little kids can be cleverer than they seem, especially if it's ...

Thanks for all the advice, home dawgs. I really appreciate it! Luckily for me, I have a seven-year-old cousin so he could be pretty useful for figuring out a kid's ...

9/10 I love the drama of it. It gets me wondering about the character being spoken of. Did he burn the place he called home? Is he escaping from it? ...

I have a bit of a dilemma. I've had a novel idea for a while now, and although I doubt I'll be able to write it anytime soon, I'd like ...

LAAAAAAAAAAAAAIK.

So I just managed to create a spiritual politics story about a carrot named Harry who gets eaten by a pony. I like this new format. I'm awful at finding ...

Really well done, to everyone who participated in this. You've all done such an awesome job! If I wasn't so busy with school at the moment, I would have been ...

I think everyone's born with a nature to be hateful, jealous, greedy, arrogant, selfish, cruel, egotistic e.t.c. which all add to what could be called 'evilness.' But that's only half ...

*Likes* And there was me thinking everyone just saw me as the creeper. D'awww, thanks guys. Congrats to all the winners! I wholeheartedly agree with most of the results and ...

Dear Mr. Caldwell, IF U DUN DOO ALL OF D3M FINGS U S3D U WUD L@IK FINISH DA PROFIL3S ND LIT3RARARARY WORKS AR3A S00N, ILL KIK UR F@CE ND D3N ...

Thanks for the feedback so far, guys, especially considering the roughness of this draft. I really appreciate it! Since posting the novel here, I've actually reread it and done some ...

Considering you're trying to trudge through mine, it's only fair I review this for you! Plus your writing is yum so y'know, I'd be more than happy to read this. ...

8/10 I'm very impressed because descriptive openings aren't my favourite kind but this has really caught my interest. And to catch Skinsy's interest... well, all I can do is applaud ...