Sins

Hey again! Sorry, this won't be a proper review, I've just come back to comment on this story now that you've edited it again. Anything I would mention has already ...

Heya Red :) Here to review, believe it or not! My wedding was a very short seven days away , Don't really need this comma. and there I was, sitting ...

Name: Liam Fisher Gender: Male Age: 17 Appearance: Personality: Liam comes across as a pretty innocent guy. is a hard working student. He's always very organised, hands his work in ...

Chahta I heard the sound of muffled shouting surrounding me as I tried to open my heavy eyelids. That was weird... I swore I remembered waking up before. As I ...

Banned because this is my 1001th post and you helped me get the 1001 post badge.

The muffled sound of heavy breathing was all I could hear. My eyelids were shut and I couldn't open them, they felt so heavy. I didn't know what was going ...

Such an in depth, amazing poll...

Done :D Next...?

Banned because the girl in your avatar doesn't have a huge, over-sized bow on her dress.

Heya! Here to review 8) I haven't read the first 14 chapters of this, so I will most likely suck at reviewing this. I will definitely try my best though! ...

As I continued running, a sudden noise made me stop. It sounded like a sneeze. As I stopped running, I watched the other two blokes run. Sighing heavily, I lifted ...

Chahta Aliricia glared at me as though I'd just slapped her. Pfft, this girl really did need some sleep. To be honest, I needed sleep too. I was shattered. I ...

all listening to. They were melting their brains and...

Okay... well in that case... feeet.jpg Me and my friends feet! :pirate3: Don't worry, we don't normally wear shoes like that. We went bowling...

It just keeps getting better and better... :|