Sins

Heya again :) Here to review as requested! You know the drill... The full moon hung low in the velvety sky, casting an eerie glow through the canopy of the ...

Banned for telling me to hate the game, not the player.

I'd forgotten about this... classic me... :lol: Austin "Whoa, what happened here?" I said, walking into the kitchen There was a smashed bottle of, what looked like, beer spilt all ...

Heya :) Here to review, duh... I was actually half way through your review and then my laptop decided to shut down... So now I have to start again. Smelly ...

Heya Attolia :) Here to review as requested. I'm not going to mention the nit-picks, simply because Kitty and Lauren have already covered them. The other reason I'm not mentioning ...

Jimmy After hanging up my phone, I narrowed my eyes at Alis. What was going on with that chick lately? It was as if she was offended because I had ...

Chahta Just when I was beginning to like Aliricia... The only reason I wanted to leave this place was because it wasn't blooming safe! Plus, it wasn't okay for me ...

I like the idea of some of the tribe B members helping tribe A members. It would be cool if they could keep it a secret though and when the ...

Thanks for the reviews guys! They really are helpful. Don't worry about taking your time to review this, lily! I'm not one of those weird, strict people who cry if ...

Yours is done RedSmiles. :) I'll get on to the rest of them A.S.A.P! No more requests until I finish these three though, please guys. I've had loads of review ...

I stared at the girl seriously awkwardly. Her face was bright red and so was mine. Without saying another word, she ran into the bedroom, leaving me looking like a ...

Thomas "Right!" I jumped up. "I'm going to have a wonder, look for food or sumit." Everyone glanced at me briefly before continuing to discuss whatever. Wow, I had fans ...

I know that people will have a go at me for this, but whatever. I just feel that I need to share a personal experience on this matter. Slate me ...

Chahta "You know," I began, observing the burning tent. "Stuff like this don't happen in my tribe, you guys clearly ain't intelligent enough to look after yourselves." I wasn't normally ...

Heya :) Here to review the next part of this! Hm... now I've read it, I feel useless... :o I really can't find much to critique at all! Especially considering ...