Sins

Charles I wasn't sure how exactly, but I'd managed to figure out what direction we were supposed to be going. Whether we'd end up in the right place, I had ...

All done guys! :pirate3:

Heya :) Here to review as requested. You've had plenty of reviews on the prologue, so I'm going to review the first chapter for you. Once thing though, next time ...

Heya jas. 8) Skins here to review as requested. Poetry isn't my strong point, but I'll try my best to give you a worthy review. Also, sorry if I repeat ...

Howdy Ben. :smt028 Here to review as requested. I'm going to warn you in advance, non-fiction is no way my strong point. In fact, I epically fail at reviewing it. ...

Heya LaVie! I, Skins, welcome thee to The Young Writer's Society! (Don't worry, I don't actually talk like that) So yeah, welcome to YWS! You are bound to make some ...

Heya Flighted. :) Welcome to The Young Writers Society! I am pretty confident in saying that you will make some great friends on this site. The site itself is great; ...

That night was the first one I'd had a full night's sleep in weeks. It was nice, that was for sure. In fact, the entire day had been a good ...

Leaning in for the second time, I felt Shawn's soft lips press against my own. It was as though a shot of electricity raced through my body. It was amazing. ...

Charles I observed the group of people in front of me. I wouldn't tell them this, but each one of them looked like they had much more of an idea ...

Done Jemjive. :) Sorry it was kind of long... Anyone else?

Is it a browser issue? Nice website by the way I think it might be, Day. When I search creative-writing-genius on google, the bit of writing that shows up under ...

Heya Jemjive. Here to review as requested. Photography definitely isn't my strong point, so you're going to have to bare with me on this. :lol: I'll do my best though! ...

This place didn't look to bad, it had to be said. I'd expected some horrible, shabby building in the middle of nowhere. Admittedly, there wasn't much else around, but it ...

Nope... still doesn't work. :smt017 Don't worry about it. My computer probably isn't good enough for the site or something. :lol: Don't go to loads of trouble because it doesn't ...