Sins

Heya yuri :) Thanks for being, like, one of the only people who actually posted their entries for my contest. :lol: As promised, and requested, I'm here to review it. ...

Zoey Barnes I stared disapprovingly at the plastic tray in front of me. There was some horrible, lumpy mash potato on it along with some tinned vegetables. They'd almost put ...

James Dakota (Jax) The morning sunlight crept through the small window beside me, creating shadows all over the room. Fluttering my eyelids open, I stretched my arms out above my ...

haha, sounds immense Jagged! :lol: I'll try my best to stay in the SB, 'cause it's awesome, I just might fail at doing it well. :smt041

I really do want to stay, this SB is immense as a whole.. :lol: You do have a point with the group thing as well, I guess. It's just that ...

Sighing, I dropped myself onto the sofa. I had no idea why, but I was shattered. Attacking people with a hose took a lot more effort than I thought. The ...

I'm feeling as though I might drop out of this SB... It's just that it's a bit confusing for me because of all the characters. Plus, it takes me a ...

Ew... I hate tea. It smells funny... And I think you will find that the queen is clearly sexy. Have you not seen her rat dog things? I mean... wow. ...

Ah... I'm in Wales though. BAM. Same thing though really... Anyways, yeah, you have a point there. I think it's half and half. Which is surprising because most of the ...

Robert Downey Jr... Uh... 10/10! Duh.

O.o You guys were busy while I was at school. Hopefully I will be able to...not be so gone now that school is over, though. I bet everyone's going to ...

James Dakota (Jax) Pulling the hood of my jacket up over my head, I sat back comfortably on the sofa. This place, and the guys inside, weren't half bad. By ...

Kate Nash!!!! :smt003 Sorry... I love that song... Anyway... Welcome to The Young Writers Society! After reading your post, I can see that you have a very good taste in ...

I definitely like the shop idea being a rather quiet place. My character's in there and I'm one of those weird people that like creating relationships... :lol: So it's all ...

As quickly as she had done so with me, I turned around. Shawn was no in front of the hose instead of me. She screamed as I held her there, ...