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I was going to make another character but I couldn't come up with a decent one. Plus, I don't really have the time to make a new one right now... ...

My first impression was that you were someone who liked McFly. In other words, my first impression was that you were awesome. :smt003 Plus, I thought you were cool because ...

That would probably be a good idea.

I think we need to go back, and people need to edit/delete posts. Decide what plot points you want to keep in for now, then add the rest in later. ...

I fourth! :wink:

Jimmy Cursing under my breath, I slammed the door behind me. I know that I was being immature and pretty darn stupid really, but I couldn't help it. I hadn't ...

I haven't been sure about what to post lately, so sorry if this is a little 'off'. I just thought that I should at least try and post something. James ...

Now I think about it, I do understand where you are coming from. I'm not the brightest of all people so I don't tend to notice hints. When you do ...

Done, F1shes! :D Anyone else fancy a review...?

Okay. It's not that I'm unsure about what is going on or that I'm lost, I just don't know what to post. That's why I haven't really posted in a ...

I'm not much of a poem person, but I really love this one. I have no idea how famous it is, like I just said, I'm not a poem person. ...

Hyea F1shes. :) Here to review as requested! You don't have any nit-pick critiques yet, so I'll start off with them. You said that you don't have a title? Remember, ...

Ack, I didn't realize how much earlier this was written! For some reason, I missed it when it first came up on YWS. In any case, thanks for donating this ...

It looks really great! This site just keeps getting better and better... :smt109

All done, Flower! 8) Next...?