Sins

I think I did about six in the end... That's all right, I guess, considering I was out for most of the day, swimming. :D

Heya :) I'll start this review off with the nit-picks, considering you don't have many at the moment. I'm not sure how many I'll find, or even if I'll find ...

I'm burned at 46. Hats off to anyone who beats me, competition is welcome! Much love everyone! Im'a go to sleep. Oh yeah, I just remembered. I need to eat ...

Heya :) It's reviewing day... so I'm here to review! The lush forest surrounded me as I ran. My legs ached, my heart pumped, my lungs screamed. None of that ...

Heya Swanee :) You don't have any line by line nit-picks so far, so I thought I'd give you some. Staring with resignation at the daunting task before him , ...

Eight. Anyone who does less than me is the laziest McLazy on Lazy street. *Points at herself* Fair play though, I have been out most of the day. The sun ...

Heya Day :) I'm here to review the first chapter of this. I need to review more, so yeah... here I am. You've already gotten quite a few nice reviews ...

Hey! I'm here to review, believe it or not. :wink: Sitting in my green velvet chair , I absorbed the cottage that surrounded me. Fresh mountain air rolled in from ...

One... WOOP. Don't worry though, I'll get on to some more. 8)

Heya :) You only have one review so I thought I'd drop by and give you another one. You haven't got any nit-picks so far so I'll start off with ...

Sorry I never thanked you guys for your reviews. ^^ @ Yuri: When I said that her fingers were spinning around calamari dishes, etc., I meant that she was deciding ...

Heya Pencil :) Welcome to The Young Writers Society! :pirate3: YWS is a great site when it comes to improving your writing, but it also has some other quirks. To ...

Don't worry, I figured that it was a joke. If anything, I need to take things more seriously. That's how cool I am. :lol: Seriously though, I don't think you ...

If this happens... I'm moving to the UK. Yes, living in a country where every move of yours is photographed and chronicled is clearly superior ;) Exaggeration much? :wink: It's ...

Heya Galerius :) You've already gotten some epic critiques, especially from Evi and Kamas, so I'm probably not going to have much to say about this. I don't want to ...