Sins

Joanna; I saw the way you walked over from the bar, y ou r pale red lips caught my eye. Your grey eyes overshadowed by dark mascara, and your rose ...

Hey Eli :) I'm here to review as requested. I am not the best critique when it comes to poetry, so you're going to have to bare with me on ...

It all started October 23rd, 1995, at 10:23pm And what a dark day that was... :wink:

I'm just letting you guys know that I am still wanting to do this. I've had loads of homework lately and I have lots of exams to study for. Stupid ...

Kinda late... but ah well. Wasssaaaaap! :smt047

Doneeeee 8) Next please...?

Heya Violet :D I'm here to review as requested. I'm pretty bad at poetry reviews so you'll have to bare with me! Dead. All souls become. But what is after ...

Heya Horseradish! I'm here to review as requested. Diana; You sit in the corner, tittering quietly to friends, One swooning maroon sleeve creeping down your sloping Shoulder like a guilty ...

And don't come and say, "Durh, I don't wear any make-up, I'm cool/a boy. Make-up sucks." Because then you're just so not cool. Amen! :lol: Anyway, basically, I was just ...

All done. 8) Anyone else want some of my awesomeness...?

alakazam... sorry, I saw the title and it was so tempting. :smt003 :lol: Anyway! Onto your review. When it comes to poetry, I am no way the best critique because ...

Waaasssaaaaap?! :smt118 Considering you abused me in my WRRF thread, I decided to come and review this. I suck at poetry reviews, but I'll give this a go. 'Cause I'm ...

Done! 8) Anyone else fancy a review?

Heya austenite :) I'm here to review as requested. As usual, I'll start this review off with the nit-picks, if I can find any. After I've finished with that, I'll ...

All doneeeee, guys. 8) Next...?