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  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: Untitled : Prologue

    Hey there, ashley :) It's reviewing day, so I'm trying to do plenty of reviews, and I'm here to review your work for you. Before I go any further, I'd ...

    Oct 30, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Worship

    Heya :) I thought I'd drop by and review this for you because this is a very debatable piece, and I like debatable pieces. You'll get a lot of people ...

    Oct 30, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Review Day October 2010 Check-In

    I've managed to do ten... I'm pretty happy with that because I normally fail at this! :lol:

    Oct 30, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Bad girl, good liar~4

    I'm here for my last review! :) I'm hoping that this one might be a bit more detailed and specific. As well as a review for the fourth chapter, this ...

    Oct 30, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Bad girl, good liar~3

    I'll cut the chit-chat and get straight onto it! ;) My critique for this chapter is basically what I've said in my other reviews. Make sure you show, not tell, ...

    Oct 30, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Bad Girl, Good Liar~2

    Hey again :) I'm probably going to have less to say this time because my critiques for this chapter are similar to my critiques on your last chapter. I'll try ...

    Oct 30, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Bad Girl, Good Liar

    Heya, wicked! Here I am! 8) What I'm going to do is give the first few chapters a pretty brief overall review, and make it so my last review on ...

    Oct 30, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Review Day October 2010 Check-In

    I've done six, I think. :) Hopefully, I'll be able to fit some more in!

    Oct 30, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Removed

    'Tis me again... :twisted: I've come to review the second part of this 'cause I liked the first part. Plus, I wasn't much help reviewing that. I'm hoping that I'll ...

    Oct 30, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

    Everything's done, guys 8) Anyone else want to give me a review for reviewing day?

    Oct 30, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Knots. Prelude, Pt. 1

    Heya Rach! I'm finally reviewing something of yours! :D I'm going to suck at it though because your writing is, like, epic, but hey, I'll see if I can come ...

    Oct 30, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Alezrani Chapter 2(Summary Included)

    Heya :) I'm not very good at critiquing these kind of stories, but I'll try my best! Thank you for including a summary in this because it certainly helps everything ...

    Oct 30, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: I Am Me

    Hello there, Jashy! 8) I'm here to review as requested. I'm glad to be reviewing something of yours for a change! You've already gotten some nice reviews here, so as ...

    Oct 30, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: When The Strangers Came (Contest Entry)

    Heya, Tiger :) I'm here to review as requested. You'e already gotten some nice reviews, so I'll try not to annoy you by being repetitive. Can I ask, is this ...

    Oct 30, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Take Back the Lies

    Heya, Flower :) I'm here to review as requested. You seem to have already gotten a bucket load of good reviews, so I'm not sure what else I might have ...

    Oct 30, 2010


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